lol... interesting inspiration, but nice poem

i really like this...i love the flow and for some reason i can just picture this in my head...and have a very weird tune in it too...well done i love it. lots of love AllyCred

I like this a lot, the rhythm is pretty too. The "on angel's time" is interesting. *btw* I chose the word chutney because in my dictionary it defined it as: a collection of spices, fruits, and flavours. I just liked it. Kinda weird I know. Ty for reviewing ;) Missed ya poetry!

Cool, i like this, it works really well the rythm is really stong, which i guess it intentional given the content (stating the bloody obvious) good poem.