|Reviews for Grim Wondering|
| Sita Fuoco chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Wonderfully emotional, A little ray of hope throughout the lines, and love entwined throughout. the message - beautiful. but one thing - im not sure i would say the rhyming is forced, but i feel this poem would be much more decriptive if you let yourself out of the restrictions of rhyming... by having to rhyme every line, you are limiting your writing to the amounts of words that rhyme with lets see, 'sky' or something... (i hope u understand what im saying _~) anyway nice job regardless!