Reviews for The God of Wrath
addie pray chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
A formal kind of beautiful. I loved how you fit all these extravagant, (black) velvet words in such a short little thing. And the whole crescendo with 'Glass-" got me. Lovely.
sylph paean chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
OH. Nice. This is a gorgeous, lush, glowing poem. It's rather illuminating in its lack of over-complexity. Bravo!
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
randomunknown chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
That first line blew me away
smile persephone chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
So breathtakingly beautiful. Wonderfully done.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
i think this needs to be read several times and given time to sink in. and then you can really appreciate the sheer beauty of it. "The ballet / The secrets screaming fairest" simply lovely.
TwystedFate chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
That sent chills down my spine. Good job.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
The abruptness conveys a lack of time, and a whirling chaotic of the mind. I enjoyed immensely.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
...This is beautiful