|Reviews for Candy Land|
| Infidel chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
Great use of metaphor. I enjoyed your use of pretty language- "twinkling stars/lost in candy jars"- very appropriate. Heh. I have chills. Nice.
| katie-chan chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
I really like this one - it's really super good. The metaphor is amazing - I really identified with it. Way to go, dearie. Way to go.
Love always and forever,Katie
| Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
Man. I just can't get over how awesome your poetry is. ::glomp::
| pyrochic1211 chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
That's really good. I like the rythm a lot, especially how you keep the lines short. It's nice and staccato, kind of harsh but in a good way.
| midsea chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
I love this hot button issues.
| Rachelle Spirit Boyens chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
This is bloody brilliant! I mean, the beginning... Well, beautifully disguised. It shows how subtle the truth is, or something. And... Wow... That's brilliant. And your rhymes seem quite natural, which is always good, but not always there. But this poem is very... flowing. And brilliant.
| silverquill212 chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Just vague enough for anyone to identify with. I love how you used candy names, etc. in the poem; not only did it gnaw at my stomach, but also at my brain-it really made me think about how warped and twisted our society really is.