Reviews for When I Sleep
The Infinity chapter 4 . 6/24/2012


Much love...

Lil' Monster
FaithSins chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I read like the first paragraph and I had to stop mid-way to comment and say You've write something that I could never have written cause I guess it always seemed taboo or commonsense but I like. Its good! :)
randlets chapter 4 . 7/28/2011
i am evidently my own god, as insignificant and irrelevant! in my humble opinion, the void is certainly unavoidable but (i agree that) it is far from void. thanks for the read!
randlets chapter 2 . 7/27/2011
pah, i would say man is irrelevant anyway. and meaning is merely man made.
Seeker of Knowledge chapter 4 . 5/26/2010

this was a major mind bender and I absoutely loved it.

it took me over two days to wrap my head around the first chapter and I enjoyed the challenge of thinking in such an abstract way

never stop writing

() Eleri (
AlbinoApples chapter 4 . 12/28/2009
I don't really understand what I was supposed to get out of this, but I really love it. The ideas are eccentric, to say the least, and the protagonist...well, I'm not sure what to make of him..or her. Did you specify a gender? Actually, it seems like the entire thing was abstract. I think that's the best word to describe the entire story. If it could be called a story.'re making me think. Lol, that's a good thing.
AlbinoApples chapter 3 . 12/28/2009
I've come to the conclusion that you are either a genius or completly crazy. Haven't decided which one. I am in love with this story and the abstract ideas it presents. Wonderful.
AlbinoApples chapter 2 . 12/28/2009
I'm not sure what I should think about this. I'm really not sure at all. I've decided to forget everything I've ever thought while I read this, because if I have any bias or oppinion on anything at all, these words make even less sense. Brilliance.
AlbinoApples chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Zeroth? Epic win. This made my brain hurt just a little bit, and I'm about to find a cold glass of water and an asprin before reading the next chapter. Bravo.
Siia Faerie chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Wow... that's all I can say. I liked that in order to read this, I really had to think. Thank you for exercising my brain.
Venustas iaceo chapter 4 . 11/7/2005
God is suicidal. Brilliant. I find this slightly funny in the sense that the rambles often find a way to contradict themselves and yet hold a sense of sanity somehow. It's just bizzare. I especially loved the rant about x equals y. I found that very entertaining.
Alice chapter 4 . 11/5/2005
I have come to the conclusion that you are either very intelligent or fucked in the head. Possibly both.

The logic/illogic in this was fascinating, I loved especially all the bits about 'If evil is dependent on good, is it therefore intrinsically good?' and all that.

I didn't find it hilarious, despite what your bio said. Oh, funny, yeah, there were a couple of lines that made me laugh hysterically, but most of the time I was sitting there making awed noises and trying to figure out what the hell you were talking about.

A brilliant story, I really ejoyed it.
Naomi Schemer chapter 4 . 9/11/2005
This is just...interesting...I think I shouldn't read it so late, because I'm too lazy to really pay attention, and it seems like a bunch of spiritual mumbo-jumbo...
Impersonal Bias chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
For the record, I hate you. Most people can't tell if you're mocking existentialism or not- which you have every right to, but eh. Forcing your poor readers to wade through the mess of illogic only to be unsure as to your true intent is just horrid.

But I love you too. Because God is suicidal.

[Your grammatical errors have nearly ceased to exist. Go you.]-Falina.
Pure chapter 3 . 7/19/2005
I started to read this once before and I was scared off with confusion. This time around, I found it really neat. It made me think. It was funny too... When I reached the end I wanted to scream 'this is fucking amazing!' but it's 3am and that'd be a no-no in my world. Anyway, I'll totally be thinking about this all night. Cheers!
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