first, woo, great story! [a kawasaki ninja? cool!] n, omg, she's been kidnapped? wats gna happen now? n on 2 the nxt chapter...

hey! great again. keep up with the updating.

wow! interesting plot. i love sci-fi stories. great job.

great new instalment! update soon.

Thanks for the review on "The Unlikely Time Traveler." It was a story done for my sci/fi class. As far as this story I really enjoyed reading it. It was very well put together.

Hey Scottsman,

Well I was interested enough to read you story. And for your first one I think it was great. You can only get better from now.

You may want to when writing a story re read over what you have written and see if it flows if it doesn’t maybe it needs to be re written.

Keep writing, Keida

Wow what an awesome chapter. This is an awesome story that everyone needs to read. It is not cool how so often people abandon us when they find out who we really are. Thanks again Scottsman for another great chapter. I can't wait for the next.

Good job please post more its getting interesting, preview sounds cool and I can't wait for more.

I thought it was really good keep updating!