Reviews for My Child's Eyes
Saint Sade chapter 1 . 10/2/2005
I liked this.
in theory chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Wow..I felt like I was actually having a conversation with you when I read this. This reads so easily yet it haunts...the way you used Iamdazzled..made it actually dazzle. Nice work. MM
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
I will quote Mike Portnoy on this; "We're taught unconditional love."
MellyBenz chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
The format of the poem adds to the effect. I like how it goes through different times in her life, and then comes full circle at the end. Please r&r if you get a chance
Siren's Bloodstone chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
This is very haunting and great. Your arrangement of lines is interesting and has a good effect. I like it a lot.