Wow! This is an amazing story and I love the details you've put into your characters and how you've worked hints of a backstory so smoothly into the story. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more soon. ~ Eris

such a lovely story! i love how you intertwine the love for animals, past&present here. please do update!

I'm not entirly clear about the whole fairy thing but i like the story and the setting, i havn't read many about the journies West.

Hello!Just finished reading the first chapter. Very cute. Made me smile alot. Then it made me laugh. I loved Charlie and Mr. Carvot's conversation.

Nice story !

Your story seems fairly interesting, but I'm going to be brutally honest with you: YOU NEED A SPELL CHECK. There were so many misspelled words that it took my concentration away from the plot of the story. Your chapter title alone has two mistakes in it: "Chapeter" should be "Chapter" and "Aquantences" should be "Aquaintances". Spelling mistakes in the first three paragraphs alone include "bussy" (busy), "incharge" (in charge), "sunbonet" (sunbonnet), "desided" (decided), "cloths" (clothes), "sligtly" (slightly), "fancyier" (fancier), "conserned" (concerned), and "yonger" (younger). You also have quite a few grammatical mistakes; for example, in the third paragraph alone you failed to pluralize "skirt", you failed to add an apostrophe to "childrens", and you used the word "then" instead of "than".

All the mistakes I've pointed out in this review have come from the chapter title and the first three paragraphs ALONE. A mistake or maybe even two would have been acceptable for that amount of space, but this many errors is NOT OKAY. Maybe you could ask a friend to help you edit your story for you before you publish it, or use an electronic spell check like the one on Microsoft Word. You really need to find some way to reduce your spelling and grammar mistakes, because an excess of errors like this really discourages people from reading your story.

Way to go! Two thumbs up for you! I love this story so far, do continue with it. I am a vary big fan if fantasy and history and when you mixed it together it made me very happy. Please continue with it!