|Reviews for Waiting for the Dead One's Call|
| A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
This is a beautiful poem... yet... eh... I'm kind of confused with the theme... the details were exquisite... but then again... hehe... maybe its just me but... I really don't get the meaning...
| MsKeller chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
For your first attempt, this is very good. I like that it's not the typical ABAB ryhme scheme, however this does make it seem a bit choppy at times. You might want to try an exercise focusing on the number of beats per up the good work.