|Reviews for Light Carnation|
| Thyrt chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
all i can really say about this is that it's awesome..
| strummychick chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
now i had a proper chance to read it i like it alot. It reminds me of something new and fresh, like a new morning. I'm sure i've grabbed the wrong end of the stick yet again...but i've said it once and i'll say it again..i dont really understand.
Well done love, your a confusing but brilliant poet.x the cow
| smelly chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
as always brillaint...as always i dont understand
| CowGirl1987x2006 chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
nicely written, this poem makes my heart be at peace right now. thanksCowGirl
| ambiguityy chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
isn't this based on your poem "love hate love"? )
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
thats really original! nice topic and writing
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
Beautiful. Flowed perfectly. Great job.
| diesoz chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
it's really good I like it a lot. The only thing I would change is that the last line seems to need another syllable in the last line.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
aw.. very sweet... we can all relte
| Starblossom chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
Wonderful poem! Good work. Keep it up!