|Reviews for disney's delusions|
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
you really made me think...i really like the bit with the antagonists telling "itoldyouso's"...surely there is something beyond the fairytales' happily ever afters...very good job...
| do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
this is awesome. it's so witty. i love love love love it. "imperfection is easier to love and/you forgive them when they PMS." gah! perfect lines!
| thosewhomustbecarried chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Ha, amazing. I really love the opening -it's great to care to save the cow yet find a tree has been wasted anyhow. It's great to see a poem with a strong point (other than unoriginal ways to commit suicide). Truly a great poem, going in my favs. Cheers _
| addie pray chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
I loved the idea behind this, and I never considered the whole Aurora/menopause/100 years thing. Crazy. The ending, I very much adore. I can't get over that whole last stanza. Well done.
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
This is pure genius. You so easy turn cliche Disney into perfection. There are so many quotables and I can't pick just one to praise you with. Lovely, lovely!
| negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
fairy tales have been cliched since forever but you give them a refreshing twist with a cynic kiss. you're becoming pessimistic, me boy. though your poetry remains cheesecake divine. -kismet.
| only weekdays chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
wow. *am in shock* that was reallky awesome! i like how you look at things from a different point of writing and much love (:
| omiee chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
i dunno, this was funny and cynical and all but sirry, i don't really like it because it doesn't sound like you. it sounds forced and like a glass pane over your real voice and it's not coming out like rich chocolate milk like it always does. are you okay? but if i look at it only on the surface i suppose it's lovely as always. it just doesn't sound you
| Lady Rhiannon-Faye chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
That was hilarious, undoubtedly. I particularily love the first, fifth and sixth blurbs. Your style is so wonderful yet comedic, in that lovely place between dead serious and pure humorous... and I LOVE it.
| NumblesTheAuthor chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
THAT IS SO GREAT! i love it, really...keep up the good work