Reviews for Raped
danielle hope chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
yea, i've read this one before it has such great emotion though very sad it is a great piece and wonderfully written
Teh Outtawacked chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
so...real. and very expresive. strongly emotions in simple words. your writing is so excellent it explains it all! I almost cried- Slaveforamaster was right about you! this sad but so meaningful that i'll always remember it! very nice job!
Chelsie Anderson AKA Chi-Chi chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
This poem is really graphic but I know poeple who have been raped and nothing adds up to your poem GOOD JOB! very very graphic...
SportylilChica chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
This is sad, but really well written. It seems exactly how the character being raped with feel. Great job!
MistressPhantom chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
What a bastard...You should read our poem The Rape...yours remind me of it
Slaveforamaster chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
Hey corey. i got a thing on here but i cant write a poem for the next couple of days so that sucks. i just really like this poem so i wanted to tell you this. i lurve . peace out.

Purehand chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
That was a sad poem. It almost make me feel sick to be a guy. It is very emotional