|Reviews for The Sky is Black|
| 000000000 chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
This was fantastic. I've been going through some other of your works and they're all great! I like the rhyming, its really smooth and cool.
Thanks for reviewing my story as well!
| Hope's Demise chapter 1 . 1/18/2006
hey this was kewl.I have that spacing problem all of the time. i think it's just stupid.
But this poem rocks all the same.
| Patito-Feo chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
your an outstanding writer. everytime i read something from your head, it seems i get to know the real you all the more. you could work of the one or two couplets that let down the ryming scheme. other then that, way to go.
| xxsyringexx chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
your just a really good writter ** plots to steal your tallent but you come up with a better plan and send me home ballin like my bitchy brother** muha! i left a review and cracked on my brother al at the same time! *Jumps up* look out whoevers in my way i'm on a roll! good job really tho. *does another dance gets tired falls asleep*
| foreverXfall chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
I absolutely love it. Great rhyme flow!
| beti213 chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
The contrast in this poem is brilliant (prophets who sell wares for a living, singing gospel songs apathetically, etc.) my only suggestion is to fool a bit with the phrase "I really don't know what to say." you're playing with a semi-apocalyptic theme here, but that phrase sounds like part of a light-hearted, inconsequential piece. also, you could probably do better as an ending. I like it, though-your comparisons are original and the rhyming comes off smoothly, something that I see rarely. good job!
| StraightJacketPhil chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
Wow, this was fantastic! Really good thoughts and imagery, though some of the couplets sort of lost the rhythm. Other than that, the rhyming worked well, and it was a very good, thoughtful poem.