Nicely written, very nicely written

Hi, tawnyfawn/melissa from horsewyse here! Anyway...

I liked how the at the beginning of the poem, you started with what they were saying, and at the end with what you were saying. It was as if it'd gone in a full circle, and it gave the poem a complete feel, if you know what I mean.

I totally agree with this point though, some people act as if it'd just be easy to do things like that.

from fawny

Umm...me?Im Australian. I speak english ..

i agree with you. but its so sad when your friends cant stop cutting and such. and then you feel helpless, watching them hurt themselves.

Is English your second language?