Reviews for Those In Peril on the Sea: Part 1 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful story! give us part 2 soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good Italian! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the story it has a great plot! ! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow! great story, seeing as it's a titanic one that someone actually continues working on... XD keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story! The characters are all great with very distinct personalities from the unhappy Emily to poor Beatrice, who gave up her love of writing because of disapproving Arthur. And I love how they all have their own little problems and you weave them all in together. I never seem to get tired of reading because the point of view changes so often and we get to see the story from so many different people. I can't wait to read more! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh you have to update soon!I love Titanic stories lol, had a go at writing one ages ago!who is Dicky going to get with? I personally think Emily! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are an amazing writer! I mean the discriptions you use are great! I hope you will continue soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this first chapter! keep up the good work. I am always looking for good titanic stories and this one is really good! (I am putting it on my favorites! |