|Reviews for Under the Stars|
| nofaceme chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Very nice. I loved how cold this all seemed. Very good emotion. Keep it up.
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
" The tears of stars
Fall into the palm
Of my wounded hand" These lines captured my eye right away. Very beautiful and the imagery is great.
I think a bit of Van Gohg and Starry Night... the painting. I dont know why. Whenever I look at it I think sad thoughts, though I am not sure it was meant for that. Anyways. I really liked this piece. Beautiful and depressing... blue.
| Pain's Lament chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Very powerful...Sounds like you've been through a lot. I hope all resolved.
| Silent-Maiden chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
-cries- Its so beautiful! And it makes so much sense!
| FictionPressPenName chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
That was so wonderfully worded... And I don't say that a lot.
| myno chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
it's a beautifully crafted poem- the art of sadness seems to be one you have mastered well.
| EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
i am turning this around there is a song "Written In the Stars" sung by Elton John and LeAnn Rimes. Is a bit more upbeat than this poem, yet, really the words are strong too, like this is written! yeah, rock on is right, no matter what music plays.
| TheDevilsAngel09 chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
oh wow great poem, a littl sad and very deep. the stars are lonley, i hope you are not. i think you are a great wrtier. keep writng. i like your work laurathanks for reviewing my poem
| Sara Celeste chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
lol you take poetic to the max! it's awesome, and it didn't even have to rhyme to have a nice flow. great work. I like your metaphors and all that. .
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
interesting strucuture, really pretty, i love the line "tears of stars" and "slips away like sand" just great x weasel within x
| ming yin chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
that is so sad. :( brilliant job, I love your style. - ming
| Poppy Pyres chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
hilovely poem this
| Nizzles chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
Ooh, so pretty..I like your choice of words a lot, it gives a clear mental image too. Me likey.
| Loup17 chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
wow, u have such a good writing style. it was very sad, yet i liked it alot. keep writing -
| Voice of a Pen chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
nice poems a read a fewmine is art ofcoursebut that doent mean yours are not great as well. Anyways i new and have submitted 7 poems in about 3-4 days check them out and thank you for that review,many more to come