Reviews for We All Fall Down
msdewey chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
I don't know that this "sucks" - but it seems more like a song than a poem. One of the songs that changes melody in parts to put emphasis on the words and add a heavier beat. It is actually rather lyrical, if a bit repetative, but that has the song thing going for it too. Sometimes you can be a bit excessivly judgemental, which is common in artists - but you really shouldn't appologise or tell your readers how to feel/think about your work, we will figure things out on our own. Also, don't correct their spelling. ;-)