Reviews for Second Start
Maryx chapter 3 . 2/14/2007
Hi, just wanted to say that I really enjoyed 'Second Start'. I liked the character of Bryan. Even more than that I liked your language, the way you describe things, the sarcastic hints and commentaries. It's for writing it.
pneumothorax chapter 3 . 1/15/2007
The characters don't seem to act their age, is the only real problem. I enjoyed reading it.
ikachan chapter 3 . 7/1/2005
I liked Jamie and hope he will really be a likeable character. Their coming conversation sounded promising - interesting.

I think it's good you take your time telling the story and introducing people to us. Aww, it's just I'd like to read more, know what'll happen. *tries to collect some patience*

So, yep, I like your story and will definitely look after your updates.
jma chapter 3 . 6/22/2005
Wow, this story rocks! Bryan is so... boy next door. You got the freaky chicks down-damn, I think my auntie has a friend and daughter just like 'em-0.o Jamie promises to be a yummy seme with a big appetite-for Bryan! Muahahahahahahaha!
roundtuit chapter 3 . 6/21/2005
Oh, I like your writing style. _
eldrin chapter 3 . 6/21/2005
Umm, where can I find some nice constructive comments...? I think I might of noticed a couple of typos, hardly anything worth railing about, other than that, I'm empty. This story is fantastic! I've already seen the characters develop in your full, beautiful descriptions. I'm loving it! Keep writing!
eldrin chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Brilliant prologue, very captivating. Love how the thoughts are the focus and how you write them so delightfully and smoothly...thought-like. Wonderful!
Kimagure chapter 2 . 6/12/2005
"He growled in a manly way at the mirror. Gr…Manly!"

Bwhaha! *falls over laughing* Between that and the Barbie Bordello, I was hooked. ;3 You've an awesome, awesome sense of humor and I love the tone it sets for the whole story.

Poor guy. He doesn't need a nice girl, just the right guy. _~

I loved it! And I look forward to seeing the next chapter! :3
pneumothorax chapter 2 . 6/12/2005
The 'nice girl' point at the end makes it curious as to how you're going bring slash into it. Should be interesting.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
The style seems almost middle aged; maybe because it's in retrospect. Not a bad start. Paragraph starting: 'If he’d had any idea of what his life would..' I liked.
compunctious chapter 2 . 6/3/2005
I really like this story so far, I hope you plan to continue it.
Ika-chan chapter 2 . 5/11/2005
The beginning sounds interesting. Now I'm wishing to find out what kind of person he will find.
rodeoclown chapter 2 . 5/3/2005
funny chapter..."renovation"...haha...*contains laughter and goes back to awaiting arrival of potential love interests eagerly*
Esquirella chapter 2 . 5/3/2005
Great start!
rodeoclown chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
Unconventional has me hooked...can't wait for more!