|Reviews for Silent Sounds|
| Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
"A dreamer sleeps, to a world to harsh."
me thinks you meant "to a world too harsh". though i could be mistaken. You use excellent imagery and flow for such a short poem and it is inspiring. You are a wonderful writer, so keep it up!
| sasha chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
thats interesting. kind of sad too.
| swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
too harsh, too much silence can be deafening, yeah sleep is a good escape from harsh reality, i don't get enuff, read too much haha nice poem
| heroin zombie chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
At first I found it choppy and overly written, but then I reread it and dug it. As a suggestion, I would take out lines like "So softly glow the candles" because they just sound pretentious. Poems pretentious nightmare to read. But, with lines like "A dreamer sleeps, to a world to harsh." it was all good.
| Dylan chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
love just plain bitesi just broke up with yet ANOTHER lovethe best thing is to stop beliving, and just live for the silencefocus on that, and you can keep control
| lordelfy chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
very good...i like it