Reviews for Past
Cinderblock chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
I found this interesting and refreshing. I like it.
Dee Dub chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Yeah, I think it's called a tanka or something.
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
quite lovely, my dear.
Toph Gonzalez chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
refreshingly eloquent, enough said...
Rosely April chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
I liked that a lot. Really didn't seem much like a haiku though 'cause aren't haikus supposed to have three lines?
withprettysmiles chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
so short but yet perfect that way. I love how you wrote it. It was very well done! I love the first 2 lines. Great job on the poem. nice job. )