It's going good. Some mistakes and...yes for once I'm to lazy to get all of them. Were you rushing through all of these?

Okay I'm seriously now a Takai and Amy person! Yeah! Please set those two up!

O This is getting pretty good! I didn't see any at all! Yeah! My first peaceful chapter to say. Keep up the good work!

"Look like I can give Kane a new mission right away" “So fork over you keys to your car so I can go out to by myself.” "She walked into another store and looked around he racks."

And I thought you were getting better. You're typing a bit too fast maybe. I don't know. But it looks like you're either writing two sentences at once or typing so fast you don't know what you're typing.

"Look, I you need help and so do I."

There was one obvious mistake in that chapter. So in other words, you're either getting better or I'm just sleepy...

Anyway, I love the relationship that is started to form more openly between Kaname and Sorano. And Akira is becoming more of a cool character as well!

I like the development of your story so far. I was quite surprised when I didn't get any updates on it since chapter 5, but I assume that was a site error hehe. All I noticed was a number of spelling, and minor grammatical errors but aside from those few problems, the story was awesome. I enjoyed it as much now as I have in the past.

The story raises at a fast pace. I can't wait to read more! Sorry...I'm bit busy right now. Forgive me for the short review!

I don't know whether to be scared or... what. It seems we both had almost the same exact idea for our stories, almost the same name for our main characters... and that first scene is painfully familiar. O_O;; I know no one ever wants to hear something like that about their work but I am just... a little shocked and I thought you should know.

Woohoo! i had a friend make me a new email account so my parents don't know! fantastic as usual! keep up the good work!

Darker

*gives you a noogie* YOU'RE LATE! SO LATE! Umm...anyway, I'll give a proper review once I'm back at school and not on a time limit. For now I'll keep reading.

*sigh* this is so friggin awesome! T_T I wish I could write that many chapters... I'll read everything else when I get the chance! so sorry for not reviewing! btw... that part 2 is currently up for reading!

ha ha ha! so here i am to review again! i was checking to see if you'd posted yet, but i guess not (post...soon...)kaie

PS will you check out my story? it's 2 chapters... yeah i'd really appreciate it.

AH! did you have to end the chapter there? i can't take it! i'm grounded from the computer for a few weeks and look what you did!

UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!

kaie

Omg, this is really getting good! Thanks for the reviews on my story and the part 2 will come after this next chapter _~ Thankies for reviews and I guess I'd better start eating up the rest of your wonderfulundo story!

“This is so unfair,” Akina' Akina walked up slowly and sat down in a chair.'“No you have me.” She pulled the trigger and a' OO! My idea of a twist was a complete reversal of what happened. Even so OO! Cool!