|Reviews for Ricochet|
| SarahxVanity chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
jesus christ, this literally made me get chills. the brutality of what happened is written so beautifully. this is terribly sad.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
russian roulette always fascinated me, i dunno, i'm attracted to that kind of stuff i guess, but this brings another light to it. love it.
| Second Hand Screams chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Wow. Earlier this year a kid at my school jumped in front of a train. This poem says how I was feeling at the time perfectly. Awesome job, I love the word choice and the imagery I get. "Apparently, the keyto popularity is dying young," that line really hit home, because it's so true. Great job.
Also, I love the middle paragraph in your profile, it's so awesome:)
| boogalaga chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
I hope his death does.
| Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Similar thing happened at my school a while back... guns and gangs and such. No one ever learns.
Excellent use of language in depicting a rather sordid truth.
| account not in use chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Amazing. I love how this was written. You have so much talent!
| SpiritualNomad chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
| bakaneko817 chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
a very moving and praiseworthy tribute. i would offer you more praise on ur writing abilities but instead i think i can only extend my sympathies to that boy's family and those affected. you definitely touch some truth with your eulogy.