|Reviews for Do You Know What It's Like?|
| Nizzles chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
Invited to places
Seeing no familiar faces
Knowing they lied to you for laughs
Fuck, can I identify with that! I like this a lot. I like how you held nothing back, really let it out..I wanted to thank you for the comment on "HOMETOWN", as for the KoRn comment, I take it as a huge compliment! Keep up the good work.
| like a lover chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
neato poem, lots of emotion in it.
my favourite part:
"She drums to her own beat
Hears her own soul
Stomps her own feet
Now she doesn’t care what you think
Don’t cry when you spit
Only sound when you sink"
and thanks for your review.. i didn't think my poem was that deep, but i'm glad someone did! :D the second paragraph is actually about putting the butterfly wings back together.. but not litterally, it's more of a metaphor.
anyways, good poem! i think it would make an interesting song.
| Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
Hurt the innocent
Shattered the maimed
Amazing lines right there _