Reviews for Playful Winks
in theory chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
(yay I finally found something I haven't already reviewed.) I had to respond to your last review, it got *me* thinking too. What I meant by the line about the British accent not being as important was because I was rereading the poem before putting it up, and I thought the "simply can't" bit with the can't in italics looked really British and strange, so I put that in there last minute. I noticed that you tend to pick out the lines and comment on them in ways which I never even realised let alone intended. I like that. But yeah, I do sociology (for some unknown reason), and I'm supposed to see the world as segmented and recognise cultures and etc, and to a certain extent I do, but America and Britain/England seem linked too closely to be just coincidence. It's like we're sister countries, (or brother, I'm not feminist, hehe),but we have different characteristics. I'm not exactly proud of my country or heritage, but I agree totally with your stereotypes about how the English culture is viewed by Americans, it's asif we both comment on each other's "style" because it's just another cliche, and everyone loves a gossip about a cliche. There I go saying everyone. *sigh* I mean everyone else. Lol, it's always the case isn't it..how ironic. Nah, I really mean the 'general' perspective. And I hope you read this fairly soon after your last review or you won't have a clue what I'm talking about (probably) because I don't even think I do. Shalom.
Sophie Ulquiorra Allen chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
Speaks the truth and delves for a moment into the state of civilization we are in.
Soviet chapter 1 . 7/28/2005
Intresting... Ofcourse I'm very much a tradionalists and believe Haiku's should do what they were meant to and describe nature, but this was nice...
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
great haiku.
Lolita SM Morbid chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Heh, it's really cute. Reminds me of the teenagers who drive down Military (a street here where I live, where a lot of people to go hang out).
moonstrike.raven chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
i love it. good job!
fffiresttartterrr chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
LOL "pretty boys" I liked that. Well written and cute, with a flirty, kinda teenage mood to it. Very good.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
cute...like it!
FlameintheFlood chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
it was short, but well written i liked it
cake-is-good chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
lol thats really cute
mugwort chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Nice writing! I love it when that happens!
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
huh, I wish I could drive, so far its only the 260 yard kind...

My name is the hint ta that joke
SpiritualNomad chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
lol, its short, and succint.
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Beautifully simple, yet perfect in its concise but powerful message.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
nice story, not really all that haiku
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