Reviews for Sang D'Amour
muffers-person chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Aesthetic. I liked it. A lot better than all the rest of the rubbish on this site. Your grammar is very acceptable. One point I might focus on is your use of phrased cliches. In the paragraph describing Stephen, for example. There were a few in there, such 'fires of passion', and 'smile of perfect pearls'. They weren't irksome, though. I just noticed them because I'm critical. Other than that, the writing was very well done. Your description is amazing. For once, I could actually get a decent visual of a written character. Kudos to you.