Aww! Lizzie is so cute! It's funny how she's so worked up about this! I don't really get the link between the first and second chapter though... Please update soon! Can't wait what Lizzie has to do next!

update dammit! The girl's hilarios...

Hurry the frig up!

LoL... This is pretty good... Update!

Hey! I love this story! Please update soon!

was that a dance they were at?

oh! UST moment! Well written, just a few minor dips that aren't worth mentioning. i :heart: this story! Can't wait 'till the next chapter... I'm hating him right along with her.

Good... although slightly (okay, really) unrealistic. some grammar that got me:-awkward split at "My younger, ... , sister" Better as "my younger sister, ... , "-You bat *eyes* and *lift* fingers. (Mixed metaphors chafe.)-one woos women and whoo hoos at sporting events.

Good. you have mastered the art of the hook, young grasshopper. I like it. You've made Elizabeth into a very compelling character in a minimum space.

Hey! I just read chapter 2. Great scene, very very funny. :) Lizzie says a lotta weird phrases like 'thank the floating tissues in the sky'... it makes her seem weird. But thats cool. :)Please write more! )

damn, i would of been shocked as well. Loved this chappie! Can't wiat till the next one! heheheheh, uh oh. was that a show that he was trying to put on.! lol... - Nessa

um, a bit confused here, what exactly happened?

loved it!

very well done, not your typical outcast girl. youve really outdone yourself.

please keep on going, i can't find any critique.

This is so odd: they made them dance alone in the gym in front of everyone to prove he's the most popular? The verbal sparring in this chapter was priceless! Elizabeth was hilarious and Keith is still an incredibly rude jerk, but quite a witty incredibly rude jerk! He's still got a lot of making up to do though. Update soon please.

i like this so far. cant wait for more )

Confused. .. _ ! ok so when is this taking place? in the morning or at night? sorry