Reviews for Poison
izzy chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
this is kinda creepy...its really gud tho, i liked the last 2 parts the best b/c its a gud thing dat actually does sumthin bad to u, so its kinda gud irony...its really gud
Sworn Destiny chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
This is a gorgeous poem! It's such quality that is sometimes hard for me to find. I love the entire poem, but the middle stanza really caught my eye. It pulsates with soft, subtle, yet unmistakably strong emotion. I really like how the last line brings the entire poem back to earth in a big unexpected sweep.
starbursts and YourLove chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
beautiful. the words seem timeless.