Reviews for You understand now
ossining chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
Ooh, I like this. It's so mystical and cool. I can't believe you only have one review. That's disappointing. I especially like the first two lines and "Ankle demons don't drag their heels." Very nice. Keep writing! :)
lunar beauty chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Woo nice use of bolds and italics. It's very different from all the ryming *cough* rubbish you usually get in these websites. Lots of, almost, hidden imagary. it almost sounds like thoughts... wo v cool. lolV nice!Luna