|Reviews for White Girl Rhymes|
| SpottedStar chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
I really liked this poem, your quite the interesting thinker-I don't mean that in an ackward way-I've just never read a poem like this before. Good job.
| Ellin Louise chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
I love the way the poem debates so many beliefs and prejudices. I agree with it so much. (the poem, not the prejedices, just to make that clear..)
| Venustas iaceo chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
This kicks ass on so many levels. I can definitely relate to this poem. Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant dear Juliet.
Sincerely signed,Anaka (Of whom is now ... the penname you see.)
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
very powerful and intense! thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. God loves you and so do I!
p.p.s. thanks also for the review.
| NightSprite chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
this is so amazing. it really strikes home, and sticks.
| pleasecometrue chapter 1 . 7/13/2005
| Death Princess chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
Wow...that was...really gud. it's all filled with anger and passion. neva read a poem like tht b4 it was really unique. im impressed. the title pretty much sums up the whole poem. i just dunt know wat 2 say its really gud. ur really talented. hve u eva considered gettin published cuz i think u cud. wow tht was just brilliant.
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
"Don't tell me that you'll cry for me" that hit me like a brick because i think it all the time. please come check out my writting. i think you might like 'Faithless' but i have alot of other good ones too. i really liked this. -Kisses you-
| Somnia chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
you wanna talk about Jesus’ love
and shake the hand of a homeless man without the glove
of pity or hate
and find the sightlessness
of seeing what really matters and try to relate.
That is one of the best messages I've read in a poem here on Ficpress. You've made my day!
| We believe in you chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
Juliet, you will never get a burn for one of your pieces b/c you portray things beautifully and you know of your talent and love the applaud for it, but what you don’t want to hear it what I want to tell you...whether you continue to read it is up to you
Everyone will not fail to tell you how wonderful your poetry is, God wont either, what humans wont tell you is how they disagree because they are scared in the fact that such a bold person can make their almighty seems so dull, now the ones who agree will speak and tell you bravo, then again that is the same on every opinion whether is be about our God or not, Juliet questioning your faith is nothing to be ashamed or cocky about, when you are willing to ask the questions, stay willing to look for the answers...
keep questioning, keep knowing you still believe.
| CostumeForAGutterball chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
interesting- I like 'the eleven hour judgement' - intriguing concept
| CovinS chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
| LaceAnSpiderwebs chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
it was good, but you repeated yourself alot and it was too long
| shifter-chik chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
I liked that, it was as if the language were spoken straight onto the paper instead of refined. Nicely done.
| Written chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
that was simply awesome.