Reviews for Fruit of their Loins
avani.awakening chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Did you apply the discovery you made about your parents to your life, or did you write it and forget it?
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
you hve to take a look at the title you posted.

it's a good poem, but i don't think you meant the title to be "fruit of their lions."

good job, nevertheless.
Estranged chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Maturity, I've read your other poems and most of them strike me. Well done