|Reviews for You are Permanent|
| GraceLee chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
ahh i love your poem. its almost as if i wrote it-every word is exactly how i feel.
| Estranged chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
The feeling of loosing someone is always the easiest to have and give out yet (bringing out the strongest emotions) is the hardest to express fully. Your poem is reaching out quite well. I like.
| crazy dog events chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
very personal-and i like the use of "lingering love" if you had just mupt "my love" it wqould have sounded cliche and silly. good job.