Reviews for Funeral Pyre
Estranged chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
I have never had the need to stifle my sobs when in that situation so I cannot fully relate but I must say that with your poem, I am a little closer to understanding how other people feel.
Relayer chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Creates a sombre mood, exactly as it should do. Nice use of language