Reviews for Worst Poem Ever Written: Part Two
Estranged chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
It does feel like a continuation to your other poem, it has the same feel yet to me it feels like a different poem. The first poem you wrote gave the feeling of being short and gave a feeling of urgency to it (which does somehow show in the reviews you received there). Lengthening it takes away that sense of urgency. On its own, this one is a great poem but I think the first poem is better left on its own to keep its original feel.
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Great poem...You know, dreamers tend to write about the things that others can't express...or don't want to think about... true...hugs to you.
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
The worst poem ever written is the one with no words...
Relayer chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Very desolate, nicely crafted. But don't get yourself down, many of us get that feeling at points in our lives.