|Reviews for Five More Minutes|
| Chase William chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
A little overdone plot wise, but you presented it well. Maybe add punctuation at end of the lines/stanzas, but then again, I am a grammar freak. XD
| MyHeart chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
wow that poem almost seemed about me... I love it keep up the good work!
| Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Hehe, this is one hell of a poem.
| NumblesTheAuthor chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
gosh...that reminds me so much of how i used to be...thank goodness i'm not that way anymore! (nice poem, by the way! good job)
| Nocte Animus chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
if i had any random amount of currency for how many times ive fooled everyone with a smile while letting my hair just cover the rest of my face i'd be damned rich...but unfortunately im not payed for feeling the same way so many other people feel.
| rosebud90 chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Wow, Great poem! I love this, its so good! I cant wait to you writr more. Please R&R my poems!