Reviews for Five More Minutes
Chase William chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
A little overdone plot wise, but you presented it well. Maybe add punctuation at end of the lines/stanzas, but then again, I am a grammar freak. XD
MyHeart chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
wow that poem almost seemed about me... I love it keep up the good work!
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Hehe, this is one hell of a poem.
NumblesTheAuthor chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
gosh...that reminds me so much of how i used to be...thank goodness i'm not that way anymore! (nice poem, by the way! good job)
Nocte Animus chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
if i had any random amount of currency for how many times ive fooled everyone with a smile while letting my hair just cover the rest of my face i'd be damned rich...but unfortunately im not payed for feeling the same way so many other people feel.
rosebud90 chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Wow, Great poem! I love this, its so good! I cant wait to you writr more. Please R&R my poems!