|Reviews for He's Gone|
| Kathleen Morden chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
AW. That's sad. Musn't read sad things. I'm too happy right now.
| Strawberry Wish chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
I love the repitition of "He's gone" it just keeps the poem so strong. Awesome job, this gets added to my faves. D
| THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Sad, but nice poem...reminds me of the phrase "time heals all"
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Almost over-use of singular word lines:
- Could easily be made to 'drifted away'. Because of this, the poem seemed to lack.. substance, whilst the longer lines looked almost like a chore in comparison.