Reviews for He's Gone
Kathleen Morden chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
AW. That's sad. Musn't read sad things. I'm too happy right now.
Strawberry Wish chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
I love the repitition of "He's gone" it just keeps the poem so strong. Awesome job, this gets added to my faves. D
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Sad, but nice poem...reminds me of the phrase "time heals all"
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Almost over-use of singular word lines:



- Could easily be made to 'drifted away'. Because of this, the poem seemed to lack.. substance, whilst the longer lines looked almost like a chore in comparison.

With another

He's gone

Far away