Reviews for Porcelain in the Infected Rain
Pillow Biter chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
Fantastic aspects using the visuals of shattered beauty to expose inner it up!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
nice repition & format.. awesome poem.. very powerful & true
Brandy Bear chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
This is absolutely beautiful. You did such a good job.

Put on your painted porcelain masks tinged with goldWear them as much as you likeUntil it becomes affixed to your visageBut, remember this:Let it fall for one moment, and it will break,And we will see what is truly beyond the ceramic would haunt both our dreams.

This is my fav part you are a really good writer I love this *puts it on fav list*

BrandyBear
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
Hi Daphne- Hope all is well! Tell your family I said hi. On another note, a great concept here, I love this "painted porcelain masks tinged..."
S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
Wow...this was so intriguing...awsome imagery...and I really relate...I love it, keep it up, please _-pammy-