Reviews for Shell |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "I hide myself in the velvety darkness once more, glimpses of brightness residing on my skin" I really love the image that puts into my mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome, Ebony-san! "What makes something wrong? When a person says it's wrong? But what makes something right?" You have a good point. "Instead of these shadows I clothe myself in, I could wear a cloak of brilliant colour, and of vivid white truths. I need not wear this mask, hot and tight against my skin, now I can breathe, and now I can speak!" Wow. I love the way you typed that out. It sounds -so- poetic... not quite tragic, but almost forceful when you state the fact that the person has to hide. This piece of poetry was beautiful. |
![]() ![]() I like your little ficcies. (saying ficcies makes them sound so cute)You write very poetically. I think I might have told you that before... |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's really good! I like the subject matter. "Instead of these shadows I clothe myself in, I could wear a cloak of brilliant colour, and of vivid white truths. I need not wear this mask, hot and tight against my skin, now I can breathe, and now I can speak!" For some strange reason that line makes me think of the Phantom of the Opera. _; Nice job! ~Toodles!~ By the way I'm Dreammistress Jade from fanfiction. You need to fix your link there, cause it doesn't work properly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I read your stories - well, currently AM reading your stories - on and I checked this one out, too! I really like it, especially about hiding beneath lies and living lies. (I think that's right...My brain understands it, but it's sometimes hard for me to relay my thoughts...) |