Reviews for The Inbreed
hans-mintaz chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
I think this poem is ttl fab! i think this is ttly well written n that! n its ttl deep n makes ya think :)
gone since winter chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
wow, this is so powerful. "the point in giving? needing" i love it. love it love it love it.
Mel chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
deep poem. especially the last 8 lines.
crazy dog events chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
very very good! i am putting it on my favorites list...

submersion?perversion/drown from emerging*

just thought you oughta know. this was so great.