|Reviews for The Scare of Pain|
| amanda.h chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Nice haiku ;) I was counting the syllibles on my fingers :)
| Slash-Lord chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
It is a good haiku, my only comment would be:
I believe the last sentence of the Haiku is meant to generate a lingering effect of deep thought, provokative if you will. Though this is indeed a good question, I believe it is too direct a question. I find that a haiku's last statement should be vague enough to allow the reader to construct several questions pertaining to the same plot. As difficult as it is to do this, it is usually worth the time put into them. :).
| Brightstarr-Bella chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
Good work. It's hard to summarize so much in so short a poem.