Reviews for Breathing Steam in May
kristhegreat chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Whoa... I like it! It's very short and sweet, but powerful at the same time, and it's hard to come across good short poems... but you've pulled it off! Awesome! :D ~Kris
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
intersting how at first the night kinda symbolises the future and how uncertain it is but then you call it "sweet night" kinda showing how you've accepted how you have to move on, thats what i got out of this anyway, i like this, thanks for all the reviews, hope to get your opinion on my other poems sometime too, x weasel within x
Relayer chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Intriguing, conveys a sense of loneliness to me. Nice work
indigotear-to lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
hum, interesting. keep posting, i missed u!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
love the ending