Reviews for The Storm
Theory Of The 4th Dimension chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
I liked this one...I liked the symbolism you used in the imagery.
W3DNESDAY chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
i liked it.. the storm and the wind and the rivers serve to show the overwhelming force of secrets. i totally get it. i love that you kept it short and concise.
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
i like this one, i kinda have this image of like leaves being all the little secrets in one massive like wind storm... all with thier own story to tell.. nice poem , thanks for the review, i hope to be able to get your opinion on some of my other poems too, x weasel within x
shadowofdragons chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Hey. I like your poem. Just one thing though. It just doesn't seem "complete." It's like there needs to be more written to make the poem flow or something. I hope you know what I mean. x.x
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Lovely, I enjoy the "why not?"

A million rivers in the sky, a million thoughts traverse the waters... you have me thinking, my thoughts wandering.
Relayer chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
A nice choice of words but it doesn't say much to me
indigotear-to lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
hum...seems like there should be more. anyway good job keep it up!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/7/2005