Reviews for Hold Me
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Great ending. Nicely done.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
wow...powerful. the metaphor was well put together. keep on going!
godsandstars chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
oh is. wow. hahaha i can't explain it. you capture the feeling in a way i could never...and i can just imagine it happening in a way that doesn't seem fantasy. great job.
beti213 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
cool. the last line is a bit of a surprise and that makes it beautiful. well done.
blackoutroses chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
the end was unexpected but it worked well-lovely.
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
One more..

pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Nice. You got the idea of lightweight across through "shatter", "fragile" and "tears". Sad.
pandaluv11 chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Short and sweet, nice job. Actually reminds me of two people that used to go out at my school.

Anyway, I really appreciate all your reviews. No one ever asked you to review me. Thanks so much!

And can you show me how to do stanzas? I'm so clueless!

Thanks again!
citrus scented chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
reiphil chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Very nice, throws right into depth. The last word tears is very odd to be alone, and it stands out hte most in the poem. Great poem once again.

-Please cheack out and review my works sometime!-
W3DNESDAY chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
i like it too!
JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Wow, this is good. Its short but so powerful!xRachx
KonekOniko chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
the formatting fits the poem, it's almost shaped like a teardrop (but we can't expect perfection from technology...yet). heh, this poem is just so...cute. love it -
queenvixta chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
This is really nice. Great imagery. Exceptionally good! QueenVixta
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
O... m (wonderful!)
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