|Reviews for Hold Me|
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Great ending. Nicely done.
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
wow...powerful. the metaphor was well put together. keep on going!
| godsandstars chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
oh wow...it is. wow. hahaha i can't explain it. you capture the feeling in a way i could never...and i can just imagine it happening in a way that doesn't seem fantasy. great job.
| beti213 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
cool. the last line is a bit of a surprise and that makes it beautiful. well done.
| blackoutroses chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
the end was unexpected but it worked well-lovely.
| ApplesCM chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Nice. You got the idea of lightweight across through "shatter", "fragile" and "tears". Sad.
| pandaluv11 chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Short and sweet, nice job. Actually reminds me of two people that used to go out at my school.
Anyway, I really appreciate all your reviews. No one ever asked you to review me. Thanks so much!
And can you show me how to do stanzas? I'm so clueless!
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
| reiphil chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Very nice, throws right into depth. The last word tears is very odd to be alone, and it stands out hte most in the poem. Great poem once again.
-Please cheack out and review my works sometime!-
| W3DNESDAY chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
i like it too!
| JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
Wow, this is good. Its short but so powerful!xRachx
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
the formatting fits the poem, it's almost shaped like a teardrop (but we can't expect perfection from technology...yet). heh, this poem is just so...cute. love it -
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
This is really nice. Great imagery. Exceptionally good! QueenVixta
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
O... m (wonderful!)