idk wether to be mad or sad i want to cry yet its just a story but he died and i cant believe ur story got this strong a reaction out of me and i am mad that they killed ken and i dont know what to say but that im mad and i dont want to continue reading if in some fantasy land ken doesnt come back but it is going on my favs :(

It's beautiful. This is a truly inspirational story, for all its tragety. Thank you for writing it. I enjoyed it very much.

~Veromorphia

I'm speachless. It was so heartbreaking yet so beautiful...

I should upload the rest of Mortality. I don't know exactly why I stopped.

~Veromorphia

How did I ever stop reading this? How did I walk away from this site just before you posted the most amazing chapter in the story.

Ken's rage was so complete, so powerful. I'm rapt.

I have to read more now.

~Veromorphia

Well, I would have liked just desserts for Walt, but being shot works fine.

Brilliant work.

Wow, that was a really good read, in the last two chapters I was reading it to myself saying "What? No that can't happen!" wow, left tears in my eyes

Hey, wonderful chapters. I really didn't expect that to happen to Ken, it's nice that Caden found another though. Besides the overly dramatic/corny dialogue, chapter 13 made my heart wrench. Sad to see this story end, but it gives me a warm fuzzy feeling.

This was full of surprises. Al shot those kids, Ken went crazy, and Caden bit some kid. Not to mention Ava shot a teenager, wont she be arrested? Anywho, nice chapter much more action than most of the others I can't wait for the next.

Hallo. I find this chapter to be very sweet. It's wonderful to have everything resolved. Though Cay makes me want to tear him to pieces for running off like that in the first place. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow, I love this couple! They're amazing! I'm so glad that Caden and Ava made up. Everything seems so beautiful and peaceful now. It's good that they both have families who can understand. Like I said before, not all of us are so lucky...

In any case, I eagerly await your next update! I sense a little bit of foreboding in that dream...and now it's got me incredibly curious.

~Veromorphia

These chapters get more and more powerful. Does Ava understand the situation between Ken and Caden, or was she too angry to get it?

The last sentence was very moving.

Keep writing!

~Veromorphia

Wow, that was amazing! Only slightly predictable, but amazing nevertheless. "I'm glad you're here"-this got to me deeply.

Is it the end of the story? I hope not, but in a way, it's sort of perfect.

~Veromorphia

This chapter particularly touched me because it reminds me of a...a situation I was a part of earlier this year. But I don't feel like getting into that now.

I love your characters. I must have said that at least five times so far, but I don't feel like I've said it enough. I feel a deep attraction to them. At first it was just Caden, but now Ken, I may like even more...

Anyway, there's another chapter I haven't read and I don't feel up to waiting any longer after a wonderful chapter like this.

~Veromorphia

P.S.-Wow, you're a boy (just read your profile)? For some reason I just figured you were a girl. Cool.

Gosh, I wish my parents could be like Caden's mom. Haha. Good story so far.

Will there be no more? I found that all so splendid. Gotta love all the sappy loveliness. lol Wonderful story.