Reviews for Family Matters
a beginner chapter 11 . 6/4/2008
im late i know, but still i have no specific words to describe it...

ur amazing u know that, coming up with such plot...
nvme5 chapter 11 . 3/21/2008
This is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read! I could really feel waht Lise was going through, the sadness, the happiness, the love, everything.

Ohh, FAb work!

XoXo

NAN!

PS - CAn there be a sequel to this, please? Or a semi-sequel with Parker?
cherrypiesizzle chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Sounds interesting.
anitsirK chapter 11 . 10/28/2007
Haha! Definitely a cute story! Nice short read! :)
cherrypiesizzle chapter 11 . 10/13/2007
This was such a heartwarming and wonderful story...at first I was hesitant to read it because I don't really go for short stories (I prefer longer ones), but I'm so glad I did. This was great, and I found myself laughing, smiling, and 'aw'ing at and with the characters. It was great. Keep writing!
EeeNAce chapter 11 . 8/23/2007
I love it! I would love to read a sequel. THat would seriously be hot. Great style, cute characters. Well done!
EeeNAce chapter 4 . 8/23/2007
cute. I love this relationship. D
SapphireEyes16 chapter 11 . 7/7/2007
finally thay end up2gether after everythin it was sweet,keep up the gud work!
kellie chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
i loved this story! it was really good
Wicca Girl chapter 11 . 4/17/2007
I wish I could have read this story before because is so good!
decadebydecade chapter 11 . 4/16/2007
I love this story! For such a short story it's very well written and the characters are actually developed. There were a few grammar mistakes (that I don't want to point out, for fear of being nit-picky) but they weren't horrifying or anything like that. I thought the ending was such a cute cliche. I definitely want to read more about Alise and Jason!
Aria Deloncray chapter 11 . 3/22/2007
Great story!
artistic dreamer chapter 11 . 1/27/2007
i would love to read a sequel about Jason and Alise! i think their relationship is so cute, it seems so real i love your stories
the rocket apple chapter 11 . 1/23/2007
Oh, what Jason said at the end there was terrible!

Loved the story, don't know if I like how Alise forgave her mom like that. I mean, I'm all about forgiving, but jeez. Who cheats on a man dying of cancer? She could have waited like a month.

But yeah.
hellokittygirl chapter 11 . 1/22/2007
This is an amazing story. I read it all in one night. D

-Lqd
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