|Reviews for Insomnia|
| Peter Cook chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Good story... I really like it... The whole tone of the story, and the wording make it excellent... and bubble wrap? You can't go wrong... I find I usually do my best thinking and writing when I'm overly (or way past) tired.
| ShadowPharoh chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
lol. very cool.
| Sally-andersonn chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
interesting concept. I would have thought no one would have to be sleep deprived to think of that but know i am thinking that i might be a little wierd.
| Aetomic chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
I think you've tapped very well into the state of neurotic, barely-suppressed madness that many of us feel when there's just no sleeping. I think this is the perfect length for such a piece, and though I think it would be neat to see you play with more original metaphors, I really started to like this around the second half. You have a good voice, but it looks like it took you a few lines to get comfortable with it.