Reviews for I Need Health
Toastntea chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
I like this bit "the ghostliness of loneliness" But the and the at the start of every line interrupts the flow a bit.
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
The lines are simplistic, and the elegance of the words makes it all very memorable. "The detail of dreams... the ecstasy of night." are just two of the most brilliant lines. A very original piece, very well constructed.