This was the first work on Fictionpress that I read.

I am truly sorry that you have left,

Wow, it's been forever since I last read this - I came back to reread it but alas, it's gone! NO NO NO! I freakin HATE plagiarists...

I wanted to read this amazing story again because, I hate to admit, I kinda forgot some key points in the story, such as...

1) How did Hunter die? And how was him dying "setting Tabs free?"

2) How did Tabs "win"?

3) What was the point of the game? And what was lost hoping to accomplish by killing everybody?

5) I remember Tabs killed herself and lost with a match or something. She said "Boom", but I forget how they actually died...

6) The whole Lost/ Kaspar switcheroo was kinda confusing. Please explain?

I'd really appreciate it if someone could clarify these for me. It's been so long...I kinda feel like an idiot for forgetting...

Good luck with your writing Kelli!

People make me sick. I loved this; I had it on my bookmarks, right at the top for easy access. Now a bunch of talentless would-be writers have ruined it for everyone. Argh. If you do manage to publish this, in any way, shape or form - I would definitely pay.

Sad to know that this story was removed and i was so intrigued by the summary of this story. Oh well..i understand that it must be hurtful. Maybe your stories will get published..just maybe.

Hey i loved this story. I'm sorry you got plagiarized... If i could and i knew you were going to take this one off i would have read it more. I miss this story alot and I'm really sorry that people took advantage of your work. I wish i could read it again and hope to find it published someday. I love all your stories, and hope you get published you deserve it, for what beautiful work you have written. :)

I'm not even sure if you bother to check your fictionpress now but just in case...

I will seriously pay you to send me interrogame.

it was basically my favorite story on this entire site beside maybe two.

this is my email:

please think about it. i wear on lfe that i would never post it anywhere as my own. ever.

thanks for your time. hope you get published. :)

wow. sometimes this story got me laughing so hard

because of its wittiness, and other times i was shaking

from excitement. in other words, this was really well

written, and is totally going in my favorites.

thanks for the awesome read.

bittersweet ending, but i realize that that's your style.

haha thanks again:]

This ending... wow, it literally made me cry. I, in all honesty, wanted her to end up with Kaspar/Lost. I know, I know he killed almost everyone but he was my favourite character. So now Jeb is the only one who survived- doesn't that mean he 'won'? Anyway, I loved this story and I think you are a wonderful writer.

It's completely stupid of me to only review this a year after I read it, but here I am. :) This is the very first story of yours I read... and I've read almost everything now. Apart for maybe two or three stories, which I definitely plan to.

Anyway, yeah.. I pretty much love you. ))

This was wow! That's the only way for me to describe it.

Every chapter was another twist to me. It was creepy.

I really like how every character even the ones that didn't have such big parts were interesting and different and there was still that connection. They didn't seem two dimensional to me.

I had to stop like midway in the epilogue because our whole cat ordeal. So I came back and finished it and I was shocked.

Boom.

A/N: one or two more chapters left, it all depends on which ending I use.

I MUST KNOW THE OTHER ENDING. T.T Can't you like... I dunno, send it to me or something? :( Please.

Wow. just finished reading this and it would make one kickass horror movie. good job.

0.0 Wow. That ending sure took me by surprise. But holy crap, this story was amazing! I read it all in one sitting and I still have goosebumps from it. It had so many twists and turns that it always kept me guessing right till the end. The details and scenarios were so vivid that it has me a little spooked now... :) Keep up the awesome work!

I liked the story all in all (it took me a while to finish it because I was reading a lot) since it had likable characters, amazing prose and dialogue, and it had an awesome plot line. I loved Hunter and am sad that you decided to kill him off. T.T I just hope he and Tabs are hitting it off in heaven or something. XD I personally believed them absolutely cute together (and was disappointed when you didn't sneak in another kissing scene with them~). :P

Read this in one go.

I loved it.

Especially when Tabs whispered "Boom"

I imagined it so vividly :)

Great work :)