wow awesome ending!great story!

Genius. you are an absolute genius. dont change a thing.

OH MY GOD!

I don't know what to say I'm... speechless. I read your entire story in one sitting. I just, I just don't know. My response is more emotional than constructive. I-I should shut up now. All I have to say I love your story.

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Freak. This story is so morbid. -_-

In a great, sickening way. _

I'm speechless.

Completely fucked up, but I love it! The thrill, the emotion, the sadness... Dear god I hope that Jeb isn't going to kill himself.

Woah~... Nice story. Gave me shivers, especially with Mars's death. I mean... that's a really sucky way to die.

I was just wondering, this story screams out to me; "Hunter loves Tabs and Tabs loves Hunter!" I mean, towards the ending, it was just obvious to me. Most likely I was interpeting it the wrong way, though.

Great, creepy story!

I loved the ending. It was perfect, i think, and i'm glad Jeb was the one who survived. I wanted Lost to die for the killings and i thought it suited that Tabitha died as well seeing as she was kinda the point of it all.

wow, the summary reminds me of chess

I really like this cahpter it had a mystery feel to it. That spooky ' im gonna get you' song theme gonna on. Got me totally freaked out. Congreds. ;D

Irrisistibly Desired~ 5/100

Ugh. I think Mr. Klyde is a tad bit creepy like as on the scary side like as in phedophile creepy. But hey everybody has their own problems. He just has more than others. ;D

Oh Hell no! Hunter would not have been eating on my sandwich He creeps me out already but hey I guess Tabs a good person by trying to get to know him. But me, Oh I would have told him to go straight to hell. DO NOT pass GO, DO NOT collect two hundred dollars. but hey that's just me!

Oh god I have a secret [Im back to Lost] But I think Im gonna stay with him this time tho. lol. ;D

Irresisitbly Desired 4/100

Oh I was into Kyle but now I'm rooting for Lost.

He has ...I don't know...maybe it's his mysterious aura...or the way he acted around Tabs.

I really wanna now his background. I want some action tho. Is this gonna be one of the dramas: secrets revealed. Like on Maury. Gawd I love Maury just as much as I love real Drama! ;D

But then again I am going for Jeb. I like his logic for Hunter.

That talk between Lost and Tabs was really touching I mean they were like talking in their own code with each other. That is like Fate that understand each other.

I do want Kyle [he eally is obssesed with the 'f' word isn't he?] to be one of the players and Lost to be one of the major pawn tho.

God I've gone to boy to boy to another boy then back in just the matter of 2 chapters. Woah. I get around. ;D

Irresistibly Desired~ 3/100

Oh I am so into this.

This sound really creative.

I like that they are in a 'artist camp' kinda thing.

Artists are soo tempermental [okay maybe that's just me ;D.]

That Hunter guy is really giving me the creeps.

I mean seriously I was totally into him at first with him having that badboy emo kinda look but now I'm just gonna take a few steps back and try and find Kyle. He sounds kinda cute. ;D

I really like this. Are you an artist by any chance?

Irresistibly Desired~ 2/100

nice story. very very good. it was very interesting. but why did they both have to die in the end? anyways. you write really good.

This story reminded me of a cross between Agatha Christe's "And Then There Were None" and "The Most Dangerous Game" which is a short story I had to read for english, but only in the beginning. Towards the end it just seemed, completely twisted. I'm sure thats what a lot of people say, but I don't know how else to say it. I love your stories. And even after I read them and realize what is wrong with all of the male characters (I've read Natural Born, Resistance and this one) I still can't help but want the girl to end up with the "bad guy". I absolutely love your writing. Its completely twisted and sick in some ways, but it is very well written. Compelling, because once I start a story I have to finish it just to find out what the hell is going on. A real page turner.

I read about half your story, and I have to say it was really well written. I would have read more, but I don't really like horror stuff. I did read the last chapter, though (if I'm not sure about a story I do that sometimes) and it was just too horrid.

I'm a pathetic sap- I like romance- so your story, as well written as it was, just kinda bummed me out. But it was good, and I guess I should at least review and tell you that, so... : )

I wish my story was as put together as this one, but it's really not. I can only hope I'll get better. Soon.