Reviews for The Past
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
I love the chorus, simply amazing way to put this. An amazing piece. -

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queenvixta chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Nice piece. The first chorus is especially strong. The end works well too. Good job. QueenVixta
LauraKM chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Great song, the last line subverts the whole thing, tis clever. Good job.