|Reviews for The Past|
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
I love the chorus, simply amazing way to put this. An amazing piece. -
!~* Noelle *~!
| queenvixta chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Nice piece. The first chorus is especially strong. The end works well too. Good job. QueenVixta
| LauraKM chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
Great song, the last line subverts the whole thing, tis clever. Good job.