Reviews for Withered Heart
first-casualty-of-war chapter 1 . 8/18/2006
Wonderful ) I'd insert my favorite line from it, but I can't decide which one I love most.
Orion Demasecus chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Why must all your poems be so depressing, they're good but they all have such a dark mood.
BrokenRain chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
Wow, that was really good. Great job _

HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Awesome work, this rocks!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Grave but etched with gentle darkness.
Brightstarr-Bella chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
This is good! You said once in one of your reviews that you weren't good at poetry.

I highly disagree.

Keep writing,


~Kia Kha~
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
Great piece...Loved "dancing to a blackened heart."
Maxwell K chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
WOWZA! sweet as usal! The dance out of step is pure...GENIOUS!
Ahemait chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
i cant believe i'm the only one to read this. -horrified gasp- its really god. the ending was my favourite, but the rest was still excellent. and thank ye very much for all your reviews!